Hmm... I'll post some possible worldbuilding tomorrow. After I've slept and gotten my brain back.
Edit:
Ok... here are some of my thoughts, though we don't have to use any of them.
Zombie hunters- I think it would be interesting if the detectives were separate from the actual zombie hunters. Maybe provide more character interaction, such as the detectives joining forces with the hunters.
Zombies- I'm not sure of an origin (I personally like supernatural creatures with an obscure or unknown origin), but I think if the story's set in the 1920's with the zombies formerly being known but now in legends then a mad scientist experiment gone wrong might not fit (but, then again, we could do the culture like the 1920's with a few more modern aspects like maybe cellphones or something like that. I'd totally be up for an alternate reality or something different- like in a recent novel I had some aspects of late 19th century culture but kept a lot of modern culture in the same world).
I agree with Sulare about the zombies blending in with normal people. It'll make them harder to catch.
And I personally favor them just killing people, though they would have to do it in a certain way to make people suspicious of what is going on. Not quite sure what that would be.
I wouldn't mind any other supernatural beings in the world maybe hiding out for centuries but recently re-surfacing. I suggested earlier maybe the zombies are controlled by a vampire mob boss, but we don't have to use the usual vampires or werewolves. The control could either be a brainwashing spell that forces them to obey, or it could be that either the boss promised them something or he somehow threatened them to obey him.
Maybe the zombie hunters could be a secret part of the police or something that was formed centuries ago to make sure the zombies stayed hidden. But lately they're coming out, so the hunters are growing in numbers and are becoming more known. Or, if we decide to go with other supernatural creatures too, maybe the hunters are also responsible for keeping the other supernatural beings in control too.
I apologize if none of it makes sense; my brain is still tired.
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Edited 1 times. Last edit at 01/11/12 10:33AM by Faerie Watcher.