Pleasimg Aromas




A pleasing Aroma that is,

The smell after the rain.

When you are taking a walk,

Down the peaceful lane.



When you're in kitchen,

Chopping Vegetables up.

So that when it's done,

The soup will fill your cup.



When you're hard at work,

In the kitchen you may be.

The pleasing smell of bread,

You can all but see.



You are around a campfire,

Smelling pleasant smells.

Of the roasting meat,

And of the stories your father tells.



These are the aromas that are,

Whether they are far or near.

We cannot forget them,

For they are very dear.



It'll make ya dance like no one is looking
Sing like no one can hear
Love like you've never hurt before
Live like there's nothing to fear-Dance-Newsboys



Edited 1 times. Last edit at 05/06/11 11:20AM by BeautyBear.

I like it, Beautybear :)





A writer is somebody for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people- Thomas Mann




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Every Person


Every person you see,

Has a different personality.

All of one Maker,

Yet different are we.



Some have blonde or red,

Did you hear what I said?

While some have black, gray, or brown,

Whether we are alive or dead.



So look at your color my friend,

You may be pink,or brown, even blue, or red.

We are all a beautiful arrangement,

That is what our Maker said.



I don't see any different species,

When it comes down to genes.

We all came from one man,

We all came from one woman.



We are all so different,

Cannot you see?

The intelligent design,

That could not come spontaneously.



I am from London, my fried from the U.S.,

My mother from Russia, my father from China,

My brother from Israel, my sister form Africa,

My aunt is from India, my uncle from Mexico.



Every man my brother,

Every woman my sister.

Each one is my friend,

Each one made by our Maker.

It'll make ya dance like no one is looking
Sing like no one can hear
Love like you've never hurt before
Live like there's nothing to fear-Dance-Newsboys

For the Baby




Do you think it is murder,

For a person to kill a person?

For he is a herder,

For the people he is going to murder.



Do you think it is right,

For a mother to kill the baby in the womb?

For the baby is a person,

Just like me or you.



I know it is murder,

For that same mother.

To have an abortion,

For the baby's a person.



Can you not feel the heart beat,

Of the baby girl or boy?

Can you not feel the life coursing through you,

The life you are holding?








It'll make ya dance like no one is looking
Sing like no one can hear
Love like you've never hurt before
Live like there's nothing to fear-Dance-Newsboys



Edited 1 times. Last edit at 05/06/11 11:19AM by BeautyBear.

Oh my, oh Dear


Oh my, Oh dear,

It can't be near.



Oh my, Oh dear,

Don't dare come here.



Oh my, Oh dear,

That is what I fear.



Oh my, Oh dear,

It's early this year.



Oh my, Oh dear,

I have a tear.



Oh my, Oh dear,

Why did the snow come early this year.







It'll make ya dance like no one is looking
Sing like no one can hear
Love like you've never hurt before
Live like there's nothing to fear-Dance-Newsboys



Edited 1 times. Last edit at 05/06/11 11:20AM by BeautyBear.

Song of Wormwood


Oh, dear Uncle Screw tape,

Would you wear your cape.

To the feeding frenzy,

That sadly is me.



I tried my best,

Oh, please don't jest.

The pull was strong,

I tried so long.



The patient slipped though,

What could I do?

The Enemy Won,

What I did is done.



Oh, eat me now,

I'll even bow,

To your wishes,

I'll fill your dishes.



My name is Wormwood,

I did what I could.

Now before I die,

I'll say good bye.

It'll make ya dance like no one is looking
Sing like no one can hear
Love like you've never hurt before
Live like there's nothing to fear-Dance-Newsboys

Friends



When you see a flower die,

You are sad to see summer fly bye.



When friends leave you feel the same,

Just like winter just came.



All my friends have moved away,

This is all that I can say.



Like the summer they will go,

But this, I do know.



I will never forget them,

And they will never forget me.



It'll make ya dance like no one is looking
Sing like no one can hear
Love like you've never hurt before
Live like there's nothing to fear-Dance-Newsboys

Are you looking for suggestions for revision, or just wanting a general reaction? I'm happy to give critique, and it won't be as long and involved as my post on your story. Might take me awhile, but I like giving detailed crit on poetry. If you're just looking for a general reaction, though, I understand. (I don't bite, though, I promise.) :)

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A word is not the same with one writer as with another. One tears it from his guts. The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket.
~Charles Peguy

I am looking for anything, becuse I am looking to improve my writing skills.

It'll make ya dance like no one is looking
Sing like no one can hear
Love like you've never hurt before
Live like there's nothing to fear-Dance-Newsboys

Okey doke, I'll take a look at them when I get a chance. :)

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A word is not the same with one writer as with another. One tears it from his guts. The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket.
~Charles Peguy