thanks! Glad you like them so much! I will defeinitely post more if I do end up doing more :) and I might just make a good friend of mine put music to it for me.
Sorry your computer is still having facebook issues :(

Like what I've seen, will try and give detailed crits later.

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A word is not the same with one writer as with another. One tears it from his guts. The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket.
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thanks dear I'd really appreciate it

also I came p with a few things over vacation, that after a bit of tweaking I might put up, if anyone is interested

Please do. I'm always interested. :)

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A word is not the same with one writer as with another. One tears it from his guts. The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket.
~Charles Peguy

Alrighty, here's the latest bit. Let me know what ya'll think

Further out of Reach


Wasn’t it just yesterday
We were young
And we promised each other we’d be friends forever
That we’d always have each others backs Said we’d never ever change
But just like everything else, that promise is falling apart
And I don’t know what happened
So then can you tell me please
Why does today feel so different from the tomorrow we always imagined?

I’m standing on this shore
While this tide called life
Is taking you away
Further out of reach

You and me go way back We’ve seen it all
Life just loved to through us curves
But together we learned to hit them right out of the park
There was nothing that could ever keep us down
We could stand any storm, stand our ground and we can climb any mountain we can make it to the top
But lately we’ve been slipping and you’ve been feeling distant
And maybe I’m being childish
Still holding onto that promise Made when we were young
But if what you’re doing is wise
I’d rather be found a loyal fool

I’m standing on this shore
While this tide called life
Is taking you away
Further and further out of reach

And now I wish that I could stop time
Cause your fading
from my life just like that sunset in the sky
Before we could hardly breathe without each other
now we’re growing up and moving on
No longer side by side
But shifting far apart
Chasing dreams; fighting fears
You’ll go your way And I’ll go mine
And with each step we take
We only bury the memories
deeper beneath the sand
Waiting to be washed away by the waves of the world

Yeah you said that we’d be friends forever
So What happened to our tomorrow?

Now I’m still standing on this shore
Watching as this tide called life takes you away
Further out of reach
And how I wish that you would just try
to fight it
Instead of giving in
You’re forgetting everything we’ve shared
As you drift off to your future
Leaving me And our friendship
Standing Broken On the Beach

Yeah I guess forever only exists in dreams
Should’ve known it would happen all along
And now there’s nothing left to do
Cause you’re already gone

wow, sorry that was me. I was fooling around with my other username

Wow...you're allowed to do that? Have two usernames?

yep yep, you just need other email accounts. Technically I have three usernames on here, but I forgot to the password to the third one

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Cool.