Ok, lets see....... faerie watcher do you have any ideas? maybe Crow could take her to some relative in a safe region? Or maybe there is something that would interest Cassandra and she would be able to mostly recover? or maybe not saying like this is what you should do, I just want you to consider if nothing else she could, die, but it would be better if there is another alternative, I don't mean to offend you sorry if it comes off in that way it isn't meant to.

I'd have to think about it; I wasn't planning on killing her off. I was planning on her recovering more or less at some point due to some unexpected news, but that was originally more of a gradual thing over the course of the story.





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yea, but we do need to get the story moving, but whatever you think will be best is alright with me.

I may just drop out of it. I'm more focused on "War of the Drought", which I think has far more potential then this one.





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would just help me finish it? We could maybe drive off the Atravans and then be done

How could we finish? It's only us two now.




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never fear we are enough to do it. But still it would be nice for others to come along side and help us carry this load. I really think we should finish it, its a feeling deep in my gut, I hate just leaving things unfinished.

I'm sorry to say that 90% of stories on this forum are never finished. It's quite common for a story to die out.




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so this could be one of the 10%

Actually, my percentage is off. I think it's closer to 99% of all stories here never get finished. But, if the stories ever do, it's because more than two people are posting.




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