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Re: I need some help...
Posted by: zutial (IP Logged)
Date: July 7, 2009 09:45AM

I've been reading sci-fi novels for quiet a while, so I might have a few ideas. I know you said suicide, but could the death have been accidental?
But if the brother commited suicide, he was likely depressed, and in a futuristic world there might be depression counter-measures such as head implants that give off a low voltage electrical current when they sense signs of depression. The current would either interact with certain nerves, which would then send non-depressed signals to the brain, or to be a little blunter, the current would simply numb the brain and give a good feeling like drugs.
For a suicide, the brother could have modified the implants to give off a higher voltage, deadly, electrical current the next time he became depressed, therefore killing him.
I didn't want to elaborate too much, its your story, sorry :P

Re: I need some help...
Posted by: Ceterus Pars (IP Logged)
Date: July 7, 2009 02:42PM

Cool idea zutial, (btw, Hi. I haven't met you before...) But then how could the nephew be implicated? Maybe...he's a techno-whiz? And could have possibly hacked into his uncle's thing? Oh-oh-oh! Or maybe the uncle modified his thing from the nephew's computer, using his account!
Er..sorry Trav. Are we overboard?

Re: I need some help...
Posted by: Caeli (IP Logged)
Date: July 7, 2009 03:55PM

(Greetings to zutial)

I think these are good ideas Trav. Or maybe the uncle shot himself (or whatever- a fatel 'blow') and the nephew comes up to him as he is dying. Th uncle shoves the weapon into the good guys hand and dies. The nephew is so shocked that he doesnt know what to do. Later when someone else comes in -someone who doesnt know the good guy and doesnt know that he would never do such a thing- he sees the guy with the weapon and the nephew is convicted. Its not very original and might be cliche but thats my idea,

Re: I need some help...
Posted by: The Traveler (IP Logged)
Date: July 7, 2009 03:57PM

At the moment, I'm kind of liking Zutial and Pars' ideas. I'll have to think on this one...

Re: I need some help...
Posted by: Caeli (IP Logged)
Date: July 7, 2009 04:29PM

THats fine

Re: I need some help...
Posted by: zutial (IP Logged)
Date: August 1, 2009 10:53AM

So how has it been working for ya?

Re: I need some help...
Posted by: The Traveler (IP Logged)
Date: August 21, 2009 05:08PM

Decent! I actually like where it's going, and my chars are cooperating nicely. Thanks for the ideas, Zutial. And Pars.

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Re: I need some help...
Posted by: Caeli (IP Logged)
Date: August 21, 2009 05:19PM

Now that you have us all curious... Will you post it when its done?

Re: I need some help...
Posted by: The Traveler (IP Logged)
Date: August 21, 2009 05:29PM

Maybe...but I'm thinking it will be pretty long. I'll prolly post it on ApricotPie, though.

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