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Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: Shadowfax (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 02:55PM

"Evil is abounding everywhere and many ambitious and conniving warlords fight for power, but one is rising above all the rest. He is a mighty swordsman, but that is not his main strength. He is well learned in the dark arts (evil magic). His armies are made up of many Haervuun (short, stocky creatures with pale skin. They have beards, and long fingers. They use any weapon but like huge swords and javelins. They detest Daarimaar and it's allies), Varlakks (large animal like creatures whose faces prutrude in a almost triangular way. Has gray skin and is a very good runner. Their hind legs are like that of a dog's, only Varlakks stand on two feet.), last but not least in his armies is the wicked Vranu (they are the elite his army. Extremely heavy armored Vranu are deadly accurate crossbowmen. They also LOVE maces, especially mace and chains.).

A few years before our story starts a young warrior named Maedrron (pronoced Medron) comes forth from the land of Darimaar. Basically he is one of those figures where all the people love him, and everyone thinks he should be the leader of the realm. Everyone that is but Baedimoar (the old ruler of Darimaar who has no wife/children). Baedrimoar hates Maedrron. (i think of their relationship as almost that of King Saul and young David) To solve his problems with Maedrron Baedrimoar exiles him. But then Maedrron finds out from a vision about the host of evil that will beset Darimaar and Mavrinaluuie, and that should they not have help from another source they shall be overrun. The vision also tells him of Gremadrok (they were unkown by by all other civilization). Thus he and a small group of friends who refused to let him be exiled alone, set forth to find the realm of Gremadrok and to seek the aid and the hope that it might and could give. But first they must survive many perils and adventures along the way.

One of the perils of which he will face is the geat forest realm of the Bounty Hunters lead by Archon of Shadows. Bounty Hunters are highly trained and skilled. They are armed to the teeth and have a small (emphasis on small) skill in magic. Their leader however is quite skilled in the arts of magic. He and his men fight for themselves and no one else. They have a secret fortress that no one knows the location of. This is where the Archon trains his Bounty Hunters and this is also their base. They can be hired at a great sum to do elite tasks. However they will drop everything and do whatever their leader tells them should he order it. Example: should they be working for someone and their leader tell them to stop all outside connections they will immediately turn on their former employer.

Maedrron starts out with his friends toward Gremadrok. The Archon of Shadows however has heard of his journey from one of his faithful Bounty-Hunters. He is determined to stop Maedrron from crossing through th Southern tip of his forest realm (Maedrron has to do that to get to the secret path that leads to Gremadrok). He sends a small brigade of Bounty-Hunters lead by Lenieth's char to destroy Maedrron. as Maedron and his friends cross into the forest a horrible storm comes out of the blue.

The storm gets worse. All of a sudden Maedrron and his friends spot a cave. They all run for shelter.

The Archon's bounty hunters and all their many slaves that fight for them are chasing Maedrron. Then the storm comes up. They watch as Maedrron and his group go into the cave. Normally they would follow suit but they now that that very cave si actually the Forest Labyrinth, teeming with evil creatures. The Archon has warned his troops of it many times. The bounty hunters know that Maedrron is as good as dead. Their mission is practically accomplished.

Maedrron is astounded. In front of him is the lengendary Hell-Hound, a dog with many heads, fire breath, and huge fangs in each head. Around his heads swirl legions of bloodthirsty vampire bats. In the distance the screech of harpies comes to Maedrrons ear. The door to the "cave" closes with a bang.
What to do?"


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Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: Shadowfax (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:33PM

Soooooo... There is an actual bad guy... He has no name?! Wottaheck!? Gah... I shall give him a temporary one... erm... Pooch. For now.

There are three places in Epidrialion; Daarimaar, Gremadrok, and Mavrinaluuie? Something like that. Gremadrok is a secret place up in the mountains. Mavrinaluuie is the coastal area. Daarimar is next to that, somewhere inland. Both D and M are fighting Pooch. They are not succeeding...

This chap, Maedrron. He's your typical hero type chap. We need someone to write for him. Anywheez... The king of D exiles him because he's jealous of the love he gets from the people. Maedrron gets a vision telling him that all is lost unless he can find the mountain place, Gremadrok, and bring them to help fight. So that's what Maedrron is doing.

In the end, they're all supposed to come together and defeat Pooch who hasn't made an appearance in the story yet.

Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: Falchion (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:34PM

Pooch? *giggles*

Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: Sulare (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:34PM

That sounds about right.

Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: Sulmandir (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:36PM

lol i agree with falc.... it reminds to a little to much of pooh.... a big yellow stuffed bear.... not quite the appearance a big tough bad guy would want....

Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: The Right Holy Hermit of the Hunt (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:37PM

Pooch is a good name.

Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: Shadowfax (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:37PM

Remember, my dear friends, the name is temporary.... the first thing that popped into my head.

Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: Sulmandir (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:39PM

lol.... ok

Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: Shadowfax (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:40PM

Ehehe... Fal and I thought that maybe Pooch is his mother's nickname for him. He has a brother and his brother called him that one time and the name spread. :D

Re: Epiadrilion Discussion
Posted by: The Right Holy Hermit of the Hunt (IP Logged)
Date: July 11, 2008 03:40PM

Oh, yeah. That sounds good. :D



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