I love the story regardless of all the problmes. For me, it's more about the content than the style, although I have added a few things to my list of things NOT TO DO IN MY BOOK.

Taking FOREVER to ride through the rain is one of them.

BTW, please forgive me for reviving this thread! I had to vent my pro-fan feelings!

I'm a fan don't worry author

I'll be a fan forever, So I dont know why I'm posting here.

Raitor!!!!! * points*